Role Play Here

I'm creating a story called "Sick". I wanted to get your opinion on it. neyisnotonfire is helping me. Anyways, here's some of Chapter One, not all, just some. I hope you enjoy. Eventually you'll get the plot. It's a secret right now. So enjoy this so far!

Chapter One-

Creek....Creek...Creek.

    The swing swung back and forth as it screeched out the noises with every swift movement. I let the warm sun tan my already tan back as my hair trailed behind me in the breeze, and then flying in front of my as the swing changed direction. As this process repeated itself for as long as I swang, I let the summer smell tingle beneath my nose. The smell of flowers and fresh cut grass lingered the air, and I moved my head to the left, only slightly, to catch a glimpse of my neighbor, Tim Wilkins, out cutting his grass for the third time this week. I had already acknowledged him as I trecked out to the swing a bit ago, so I let him continue to tend to his love: His yard.

    My eyes wandered up to see Mr. Wilkins' fountain, and let myself sigh at it's beauty. You could hear the constant trickle of water stream down all around it, letting a mist spray down from the sprouting water above it all. What baffled me the most, is Tim took all his time into creating it for two summers. Hand made out of rocks and the pure, clean water that he used for his house, too. It was absolutely crystal clear. No bugs, no grass, no dust particals, even! It was truly so beautiful; and even at night, little solar lights lit up around it, lighting the beauty of the fountain in the dark nights.

    My mind directed back to swinging, and I found myself feeling the boredom creep in. So I slowed the swing until I was able to jump off it and stand there, looking around a bit dumbfounded. I let my eyes wander around our yard. Tim Wilkins' yard was absoultely beautiful; fresh cut, pure green grass, flower beds of all the most beautiful flowers in the world, and soil as rich as could be. Yard decorations scattered around the yard in the least gawdy way, causing it to be one of the biggest attractions in the neighborhood. Then the trees. Gigantic as ever, sprouting their fine branches of leaves that drifted with a small breeze. Now directing my eyes back, I saw our yard. It was decent, but nothing compared to Mr. Wilkins'. We had a large willow that hung over a pond we had, but nothing special. It was nice, yes, but I adored Tim's yard with a passion. How it would be to wake up every morning with a cup of coffee, staring out at your elegant yard you were proud to claim as your own.

    Stretching out my muscles, I let the morning sun taunt me with it's beautiful day, begging me to go play or do something. I took in a sigh and started heading towards the front of my house to go for a walk. Once I reached the sidewalk that trailed out along the gaited community, my German Shepherd, Travis, bounded forward with leaps and awaiting love for me. He reached me now, tongue lolled out and ready to attack me with kissing, but I refused, putting my hands up, trying to protect myself from the loving beast. "Travis!" I exclaimed as he made circles around me, swishing his tail, letting it thump against my legs. "Apparently you're coming on a walk with me, huh?" I patted his silky head as I asked the rhetorical questions, watching as Travis yipped in excitement. Apparently that was his answer, and I wasn't about to refuse it. "Alright, let's go.," I said with a smirk on my face. How Travis loved me as much as he did, I would never know the answer, but I was grateful he did, anyways.

I fixed will to willow. It was supposed to be willow. o.o

*Claps* Good, good. Have you ever heard  of a site called Wattpad? Kynzie & I are on there, and it's where you publish stories/ works. Even though you are probably not ready yet, please think about it.. Because this is a good piece of writing material, and I would love to see your work on there! So please think about it!

Alrighty, miss proffesional. xD And....not ready? xD Thanks, though. Like I said, that's not the full chapter at all, and whatever you think the story line is about, you're probably wrong. Out of curiousity, what do you think it's about?

A girl who get's cancer, I do not know..

xD Okay. I'll just say no on that, but good guess. 

whats it supose to be about?

IT'S A SECRET. GOOOOSH. o.o

sense when do lovers keep secrets!?!?!?