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well i was going to send a mesnge but im like NAH this is way more undisclosed XD | |
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Member Posts: 10981 | x3 I'm here. Uhh, I guess. It depends on what your learning about. | |
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while were not learning anything, i have to make a peom but i haveing truble i want to put alot in it ~a unified dance ~like earth and sky ~of two born with snowy fur, a male annd a female ~both identical but there eyes remain there identiy ~the fae has firey lighting shimmering threw ~the other like a cool wave crashing on a dry shore ~both the same but both opposites ~the female hunts for game ~the brute sings with the birds ~the female in in anger has lightning crash down from the sky ~the male sings to the clouds danceing with the wind for rain | |
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Member Posts: 10981 | x3 Does it have to rhyme? Or is it just, write a poem, poem? It sounds good though. ;D | |
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im doing the free style one so it doesnt lol | |
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Member Posts: 10981 | Ah. :3 Welllll, it sounds awesome so far. Use big words to confuse people and show that your smart xD. | |
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~a unified dance ~of earth and sky ~of two born with snowy fur, a male annd a female ~both identical but there eyes remain there identiy ~the fae has firey lighting shimmering threw ~the other like a cool wave crashing on a dry shore ~both the same but both opposites ~the female hunts for game ~the brute sings with the birds ~the female in in anger has lightning crash down from the sky ~the male sings to the clouds danceing with the wind for rain ~the lightning crashs into the forest ingniting the ritual, flame blaze licking at the trees, whiping out all it sees ~ the male simply raises his voice he shows no fear as he runs threw the flames, his song ruthmic with the crackle with in the firey destruction, but soon the call is answered by the clouds rain bursting threw the heaven ~the female pleased with her part in the chard woods ~ the male stands next to her, he shows no saddness as he leans his head towards the heaven and howls to the now riseing moon and the spirits of those lost rise and follow his voice then as they enter the clearing they rise into the sky leaping and bounceing into the air riseing to the moon see it doesnt sound like a poem >_< | |
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Some famous poems don't sound like poems. :3 I love yours! ;D | |
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~a unified dance ~of earth and sky ~of two born with snowy fur, a male annd a female ~both identical but there eyes remain there identiy ~the fae has firey lighting shimmering threw ~the other like a cool wave crashing on a dry shore ~both the same but both opposites ~the female hunts for game ~the brute sings with the birds ~the female in in anger has lightning crash down from the sky ~the male sings to the clouds danceing with the wind for rain ~the race is on, the female leaps forward the male matching her stride ~togather they run the corscrew dance twining togather, the lightning crashes threw the sky as she raises her voice to the sky while the male dances along side her ~the thunder echos and the lightning crashes, flames burst from within the weathered forest ~her song softens as the fire licks at there coats only makeing the race all the more ~but then like a summer breeze the male lets out a howl, the clods grow heavy to his call and soo release there contanments, the water sweepng threw the fire ~there dance becomes one fire and water merging all at once thunder crys and the wind bends but all is settle in the end | |
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Three words: I. LOVE. IT. (: | |
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yay! | |
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~a unified dance ~of earth and sky ~of two born with snowy fur, a male annd a female ~both identical but there eyes remain there identiy ~the fae has firey lighting shimmering threw ~the other like a cool wave crashing on a dry shore ~both the same but both opposites ~the female hunts for game ~the brute sings with the birds ~the female in an angery cry lightning crash down from the sky ~the male sings to the clouds danceing with the wind for rain ~the race is on, the female leaps forward the male matching her stride ~togather they run the dance twising togather, the lightning crashes threw the sky as she raises her voice to the sky while the male dances along her side ~the thunder echos and the lightning crashes, flames burst from within the weathered woods ~her song softens as the fire licks at there coats only makeing the race all the more ~but then like a summer breeze the male lets out a voice, the clouds grow heavy to his call and soon release there water sweeps threw the fire ~there dance becomes one fire and water merging all at once thunder crys and the wind bends but all is settle in the end ~choas becomes calm. togather they stand- both identical but both opossite, there head reach for the sky, there melody burst forward power and softness swirling in the sister wind, riseing as the moon ~ spirits of the lost wake from the slumber, they follow the song, they follow into the heaven where the moon becomes there eternity
hm, i thinkim done now, but im not sure...maybe it could use more lol and maybe i can stop bugging you XD | |
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It's awesome! Hopefully you'll get an A or an A+. | |
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ill have to go over it with him :D, an i have to draw a cover page XD i have a week so im safe | |
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Oh Jesus. You have a week? -_- Why the hell are you worrying about it now? xD | |
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cause im bored and need to vent my creativity XD | |
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xD Well, that is a way to do that. x3 | |
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lolz, so hows it goin? | |
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Member Posts: 10981 | Random? x3 | |
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