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the world spun around her as the blood drained from her next her first thoughts: "did that guy just fricking bite me!" and the second: "was i going to die?" her legs gave way beneath her forceing the girl to fall back, a man laughed and stepped closer, his mouth was closed but she could see the crimmsion beads crawl down his neck his blond short hair slicked back , all he wore was a pair of black pants no shirt exposeing muscular figure. she crawled backwards alittle one hand fiting over her wound the warmth crawling threw her finger. he reached down an brushed the air away from her face looking into her eyes ,like caught in a spiders web she was forced to look into his icey eyes like a shallow abyss she felt frozen- no this wasent right she litorly couldnt move her eyes locked within his, he smiled seemingly enjoying her fear and her pain, she could partly see a smile crawl over his pale lips showing his teeth, her heart raced like a sharkes mouth each tooth serrated and shape like k-9's. her body body began to feel faint and cold but dident shiver to gain warmth, her chest dident rise an fall there was no motion just the breeze blowing her hair gentaly the image of his eyes being burned into her mind, he blinked and a gasp tore threw her lips taking in the air she had been without- now a slight tingiling fell over her, he looked away squinting into the forest in a blur of something the man was gone- a bone shattering crack came from her right, she still couldent move, but her eyes rolled to the rigth catching a glimpes of another man rusty hair an his body covered in strange tatoos, maybe brands. she blinked trying to see farther, the man with the fangs was held up againest a tree a hand around his throat, but soon the world faded to a blur and her mind fell away.

blackness,impenatrable around her she felt weightless such as u would in a dream like state she wondered if she was alive or dead but somthing alway brougth her back, prehaps a voice or a touch but itwas always distant and momentary she feltno warmthwithin her but heart the gental echos of her beating heart sootheing her, suddenly a coolness washed over her suddenly her body felt closed in she felt her lungs become heavy and air become inpossible to uptain slowly the darkness embed away and her eyes flared open bubbles flased before her and the water swarmed her eyes forceing them shut again- she pushed what air she had lef t in her chest out, the bubles cressing againest her skin as they floated up, somthing grabed hershoulder and the water seemed tighter around her as she soon felt the hummide air brush again her and the earth on her backher eyes flutter open, a man with red algae eyes and rusty hair looked down at her his mouth moved but she herd no words, she to have worrie pained across his face she blinked her heart weaker then before, his expression changed to grim as he brought his hands upward and they seemed to shimmer- maybe glow with a red and green flame like light ne pressed down on her chest and pain stormed threw her, her body arched into the air fist clenched her heart pounded, like an animal had awaken within her and despretly wanted out, her mouth opened but nothing happen, no scream no gasp of pain, her back slamed back againest the ground her blood ran hot threw her as if her the blood itself where flames that flickered threw her what felt like hours seemed to go but before her body relaxed her vains still boiled but threw the painfuled tears she saw the man again still on his knees next to her his bangs covered his face and his arms dangled at his sides, tired to sit up but she felt as if shed rip every mucale if she did. "who are u?" her scratchy voice nearly a whisper. he looked over at her, his eyes cold but some how comfreting "my names..drake" he spoke with a wisdom edged voice, not like one u hear from ur grampa but more like the kinda u here from a man hows been threw alot, her eyes ran up his arm- there were brands they enveuped his body, he careful moved his arms under her an rose, her head fell back dagling to weak to hold it up "its not save here jax, u cant be put an anymore danger" her mind snapped back to her as the words left his lips "he knows my name?" her thoughts murmured

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