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Also Reviewers. You Give The book Stars.

 On Three Things.

 One: How Well Writen? That Means Did You UnderStand It. You Can Give Up To 5 Stars on that.

Two: Did You Think That The story Kept flowing Or it kinda got off Track. You can Give up To 5 stars.

Three: Was there a plot? All of people? Drama? Or what ever There book is? You Can Give UP TO 10 Stars on That.

There is a huge total of 15 Stars!

More will be added if needed!

- Tess

UserName: Tess-Smith

How Many Posts You Made: 580

Why Do You Want To Review Books: ITS FUN!

What Kind Of Books Do u like: All

How Often Do You Read: Once a day

Anyother Things I Should Know: Nope

We Only can have 4 more Reviewers.. Anyone?

UserName: Tabbie-Cat

How Many Posts You Made: (Not Counting This One.) 4356

Why Do You Want To Review Books: couse i love reading and think this would be fun

What Kind Of Books Do u like: all

How Often Do You Read: at least 4 times a week

Anyother Things I Should Know: nope

You may be a reviewer! Ill Post my book!

ok! I made a book i KNOW it needs discription.

Alright. I dont have a name for it and il enter a skelly after i post it.

This story started with a bang, then a scream, and ended with this screeching
evil laugh. Through my burly eyes, i saw a women with red eyes. Blood dripping
from her lips. She was smiling at us, laying on the floor. We must have look
dead to her. The floor was slaplatered with the color red. As so was my hair.
As the wicked women left out the door into the cold fall night, I pushed my self
up and looked around. I felt my Neck and felt the bite marks. I hated the fact
that now, life as I knew would be much different then I planed. I dislike the
fact that my life is changed, and i didn't get to pick if I wanted it changed. I
touched the blood and look at it. Now, I don't crave food. I crave the sweet
taste of blood. I lick my finger. The blood tasted sweet, different but
something my stomach craved. It was a odd, strange feeling my stomach now had. I
knew what that feeling was, I wouldn't let myself admit it. I loved how this
blood tasted and I was hungry for more. I was also afraid of myself. What if I
turned into someone who kills people that had no right to die? I stood up and
looked at my parents. They looked like there were dead. Not vampires, just dead.
Is that what I really am? A vampire? I had always thought that they were just
blood sucking freaks. Is there much more to them? I grab my coat and walk
outside. Maybe it was just a dream I would wake up from. Or a nightmare that
just might never end. I look around the best I can, my eyes still blurred. As
the wind rolled by it felt as if it was screeching my name. Rose. Rose, how
could you let your family die? Do you feel any pain? "Stop, stop it!" I put my
hands over my ears and sit down crying.

UserName: Tess-Smith

Name Of Book: Unamed

Genere: Drama

How long Is It So Far: IDK.. :3

How Many Stars Do You Think It Should Get: IDK.

good

15 stars

Thanks. Anything wrong or needs to be fixed?

UserName: Tabbie-Cat

Name Of Book: Thunder

Genere: Adventure

How long Is It So Far: its finished

How Many Stars Do You Think It Should Get: 10

Thunder

Chapter 1: Thunder’s Beginning

I was celebrating my 1st birthday with my sisters and brothers when it happened. I had a unique gift, I could read. We were all gently picked up and put in a cardboard box. I could feel the box being picked up and carried. I looked out a hole in the box and saw that we were being took out on to the sidewalk. I looked around and saw that my mom was no where to be found. Then I felt the box gently being set down. I looked up and saw the sign. I shivered at the words, “ABBYSIN KITTENS FOR SALE”. One by one my sisters and brothers were taken. First Ruby, then Willow, next Sammy, and then Ginger. The only ones left were me and Rocket. A mean looking lady came and started asking about us. She started whispering to my previous owner. After a lot of whispering, she finally pointed to me.

Chapter 2: A Rocky Road

The lady roughly picked me up. She stuffed me into her purse and through her blood red purse into her matching car. The purse started rolling around as she drove sending me rolling in every direction. The purse finally settled upside-down pinning me under an avalanche of random stuff. I couldn’t get out, so I just decided to stay there. When the lady came to get her purse, she blamed me for tipping over the purse. She picked me up, and started carrying me towards her house. As we got closer I saw a frightful sight. It appeared she hadn’t cleaned her house for a month!!!

Chapter 3: A New Friend

The lady took me inside the house and I saw that she had hundreds of cats!!!!! I saw a Scottish Fold cat in the middle of all the other cats getting picked on because of his ears. I jumped down in the middle of all the cats, scaring them away. I said, “Hi, I am Thunder, what’s your name?” “My name is Plaid. I am a Scottish fold!” said Plaid. Let me just make this clear right now. I haven’t and never will forget that cat. He had saved my life.

Chapter 4: The Escape

Plaid and I lived happily together for the next year. Than came that day, that horrible day that I try not to remember. It started out as a day like any other, except for one thing, the lady watched T.V. and the weather man said “Tornado coming to Cricket Valley! Leave now!!” We lived in Cricket Valley, and the lady got up and leaved. I went and told Plaid and we agreed that it was no big deal. Later that day when the tornado struck, we panicked. We ran for the bathroom to get in a hole in a wall that always was blocked off. The wind had blown out the covering and the only way to survive was to get out of the house. We ran for the hole as the tornado tore through the shed. Plaid dived through the hole and waited for me. My paw had gotten stuck in a basket that fell, and I couldn’t escape. The tornado tore through the front half of the house, and in 2 minutes, I would be sucked into the lung-stinging dust and dirt filled tornado. I yelled, but no one came. Plaid stuck in his head and saw me. Plaid ran back into the house and freed me, he told me to go and I did. The tornado tore through the rest of the house just as I got out. Plaid had saved my life, but gave his. I looked back at the house and cried. I was free, I thought I would never be abused again. I didn’t know what was in my future. I walked away from the house, I walked, trying to find my mom, my dad, somebody.

Chapter 5: The Walk

I walked, I walked, and I walked some more. I was hungry, tired, cold, but most of all, I was scared. Never in my life had I felt so alone. I had lost my brothers and sisters, my mom, my dad. I had lost my one true friend, I didn’t know what would happen to me. I walked along the side of the highway, sometimes cars would stop, but most of the time they didn’t. I walked to the dock where I found that fisherman. He was a nice man, and he gave me 3 fish and some water!!! Than his buddies came. They shooed me off. I ran away, I ran strait into a person who wanted money. He picked me up and looked at me. Than, he carried me away.

Chapter 6: Thunder The Saber Tooth Cat

The man used a long stringy brush to spread gooey stuff on me. The gooey stuff looked tan. Than he put long, white, pointy things that were so long, they hung out of my mouth. I think that they were supposed to be teeth because he put them on my canines. He put me in a cage than picked up the cage and ran out side. He started yelling, “I found a saber tooth tiger!!!!!! He must be a baby!!!” A lot of people gathered around to see me. I meowed and the man made me be quiet. A lot of the people started giving prices like: $100, $500, $1500, one person said, $1,000,000! “Sold!!!” The man said. My cage was handed over to the scientist and the scientist walked away.

Chapter 7: Ms. Lorry

As the scientist took me to her house, it started raining. The rain started making the gooey stuff run off of my fur. The scientist noticed when we got to her house and gave me a bath and took the fake teeth off. “I am Ms. Lorry” she said when petting me. “I am sorry, but I am allergic to cats so you have to go.” I could see the sadness in her eyes as she fed me and put me down outside. She waved to me as I left and I waved to her with my tail.

Chapter 8: Rocket

I walked away from Ms. Lorry and I went into the woods. I saw something my age, my size, and my color. “Rocket!” I yelled. Rocket saw me and ran over. I couldn’t believe it was him! Rocket was my brother!!!!! We walked together as he told me his story. We got to a pond and drank some refreshing water. I felt like a piece of my life was back. Rocket, I am not sure what he was thinking just then, but a wave of sadness covered his eyes. I asked him what was wrong, and he wouldn’t answer. We came to a farm and hunted mice.

Chapter 9: A New Family

We kept hunting intill some children came out of the house. I thought “They look like a nice family!!!! Plaid would love them!!!” I choked back tears at the thought of Plaid. I wished he could be here with me and Rocket. The family adopted us and gave us a nice meal. I chased mice, and Rocket chased rats. I had a good feeling about this family, something I couldn’t explain. I new that I was meant to be here, and that I would never be abused. My life was good except for one thing: Plaid. I suffered, my heart broken at the thought of Plaid. Than came the day that the family let me and Rocket into the house.

Chapter 10: A Happy Life

I thought I was dead, I thought I saw a ghost, but I didn’t!! There standing in frount of me was Plaid!!!!! I fell over. He walked to me and I bit myself to see if I was dreaming. It hurt, I was awake!!!!! I asked Plaid were he was and he said, that’s a LONG story. He said that he would tell me that a different time. I introduced Rocket to Plaid and Plaid to Rocket. I still live here to this day. I have about the best life anyone could dream of. Well, I hear the children calling so I should go now. Thanks for listening!!!!

The End

nope, I like yours!

Again, I know it needs discripten.

IM SO STUPID! I PUT 5+5+10 is 15.... OMG. U get 16 out of tewntey. U were right it need more dicrepion and less ? And !! But over all good..

thanks!

U are going to add more, Right?

Now... Im stuck on my story..

UserName: Trixie the News Wolf

How Many Posts You Made: 1,012

Why Do You Want To Review Books: For my daily newsletter.

What Kind Of Books Do u like: Any, as long as they are Literate.

How Often Do You Read: Alot.

Any other Things I Should Know: None.

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UserName: Wolfeh-Da-Great ( Seperate thing )

Name Of Book: The Life of a Wolf

Genere: Drama

How long Is It So Far: I am going to start the first chapter in a moment.

How Many Stars Do You Think It Should Get: Hmm, I dunno. At least 10, I would say.

UserName: nightfire

Name Of Book:broken dream catcher for now

Genere: fanasy, adventure, little bit of horror

How long Is It So Far: not very much i dont have word so i can give u a page  number

How Many Stars Do You Think It Should Get: um as many as its worth

the world spun around her as the blood drained from her next her first thoughts: "did that guy just fricking bite me!" and the second: "was i going to die?" her legs gave way beneath her forceing the girl to fall back, a man laughed and stepped closer, his mouth was closed but she could see the crimmsion beads crawl down his neck his blond short hair slicked back , all he wore was a pair of black pants no shirt exposeing muscular figure. she crawled backwards alittle one hand fiting over her wound the warmth crawling threw her finger. he reached down an brushed the air away from her face looking into her eyes ,like caught in a spiders web she was forced to look into his icey eyes like a shallow abyss she felt frozen- no this wasent right she litorly couldnt move her eyes locked within his, he smiled seemingly enjoying her fear and her pain, she could partly see a smile crawl over his pale lips showing his teeth, her heart raced like a sharkes mouth each tooth serrated and shape like k-9's. her body body began to feel faint and cold but dident shiver to gain warmth, her chest dident rise an fall there was no motion just the breeze blowing her hair gentaly the image of his eyes being burned into her mind, he blinked and a gasp tore threw her lips taking in the air she had been without- now a slight tingiling fell over her, he looked away squinting into the forest in a blur of something the man was gone- a bone shattering crack came from her right, she still couldent move, but her eyes rolled to the rigth catching a glimpes of another man rusty hair an his body covered in strange tatoos, maybe brands. she blinked trying to see farther, the man with the fangs was held up againest a tree a hand around his throat, but soon the world faded to a blur and her mind fell away.

blackness,impenatrable around her she felt weightless such as u would in a dream like state she wondered if she was alive or dead but somthing alway brougth her back, prehaps a voice or a touch but itwas always distant and momentary she feltno warmthwithin her but heart the gental echos of her beating heart sootheing her, suddenly a coolness washed over her suddenly her body felt closed in she felt her lungs become heavy and air become inpossible to uptain slowly the darkness embed away and her eyes flared open bubbles flased before her and the water swarmed her eyes forceing them shut again- she pushed what air she had lef t in her chest out, the bubles cressing againest her skin as they floated up, somthing grabed hershoulder and the water seemed tighter around her as she soon felt the hummide air brush again her and the earth on her backher eyes flutter open, a man with red algae eyes and rusty hair looked down at her his mouth moved but she herd no words, she to have worrie pained across his face she blinked her heart weaker then before, his expression changed to grim as he brought his hands upward and they seemed to shimmer- maybe glow with a red and green flame like light ne pressed down on her chest and pain stormed threw her, her body arched into the air fist clenched her heart pounded, like an animal had awaken within her and despretly wanted out, her mouth opened but nothing happen, no scream no gasp of pain, her back slamed back againest the ground her blood ran hot threw her as if lava was poored into her vains

ill type more later- an or fix it but computers dieing

U may be a reviewer! And We have only 2 spots left!

UserName: nightfire

How Many Posts You Made: (Not Counting This One.) 916

Why Do You Want To Review Books: to help people make better storys

What Kind Of Books Do u like: i love fanasy, were wolfs adaventure

How Often Do You Read:  not very much lately

Anyother Things I Should Know: i see how i feel, if i dont like somthing its my opion- i just dont want people yelling at me when i give my honest inpression of a book-  and i terrible at spellin so i normaly dont reveiw grammar, spelling etc.